vunderba a day ago

One of my favorite video games of all time is the Western CRPG Betrayal at Krondor, set in the Riftwar Cycle universe as written by the relatively well-known fantasy author Raymond E. Feist.

The deft writing in that game is my go-to example for how to avoid that dime-store novella quality "purple prose," that you see so much in D&D fiction, and it easily holds its own against strong contenders in the writing category (Disco Elysium, Baldur's Gate, etc.).

Fair warning if you decide to go play it: spellcasting in the game is almost stupidly OP (cough Skin of the Dragon cough). Still great fun, but the combat is by far the weakest aspect of the game.

  • chongli a day ago

    the combat is by far the weakest aspect of the game

    I would correct that to say balance is the weakest part. The open-endedness of the game is one of its strong suits (which is surprising given how it’s written) but there are many opportunities for an enterprising player to break the game. You can make your party fabulously wealthy just by exploiting the merchants in the game and then use the money to deck out the party with overpowered equipment.

    • vunderba a day ago

      Yeah. A LOT of games have that "economic exploit" where you can generate infinite money. But in BAK just barding alone you can get as much money as you need - no tricks involved.

      The bigger issue is giving the player a "Invulnerability spell" where X mana = X turns, and having the spell block both PHYSICAL and MAGICAL damage. Worse, you can (and I did as a kid) find this spell in the first chapter of the game.

      If your party gets move priority, there is literally NEVER a reason to not immediately throw it on all three characters. You can even rest WHILE in combat and recover the stamina necessary to cast the spell. Let that sink in for a minute.

      I used to deliberately skip getting that scroll after I beat it the first time because it made the game trivially easy.

      Also all long-range physical damage (such as with crossbows) was basically pointless. They should have made it so if you successfully hit with a crossbow, the opponent becomes "temporarily hampered" and it halves their movement speed. As it is, it's trivially easy to engage in close combat with almost every enemy in game.

      I'd love to see a modernized BAK with more D&D style combat mechanics (attacks of opportunity, flanking, etc.)

  • djur a day ago

    Feist didn't write the game, however.

    • vunderba a day ago

      That is true but I think he had a fair amount of input, and of course, all the rich lore and universe comes from him.

      He actually later officially novelized the game. Kind of an interesting bit of trivia in the video game industry going from literature to game and then back to literature.

      https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Krondor:_The_Betrayal

NikolaNovak a day ago

One of my favorite current authors is Peter Watts. His Blindsight is absolutely sublime and insightful, and I reread it frequently (and get more out of it each time).

Apparently he's written for Crysis and his next book is on backburner because Video Games actually pay rent :-).

  • shoo a day ago

    Watts is an excellent hard scifi author & a lot of his older writing -- including many short stories, the Rifters trilogy (Starfish/Maelstrom/Behemoth) and the excellent novel Blindsight are available to read here: https://www.rifters.com/real/shorts.htm

    Peter Watts has been interviewed on the science fiction podcast "tales from the bridge" a few times -- IIRC on this episode with Peter Watts & Richard K Morgan (author of Altered Carbon), both authors discussed writing for video games. https://podcasts.apple.com/us/podcast/a-chat-with-peter-watt...

gabriel666smith a day ago

I would love to write video games (novelist by day-job). The formal possibilities are absolutely fascinating, and so wide, and getting wider by the day with LLMs. ‘Disco Elysium’ is one of the most interesting works of literature I’ve ‘read’ in years, and there’s scope to do so, so much more.

The barrier to entry seems confusing, though. None of my agents seem to understand that world (fair enough!). I’ve written whole scripts for games - as writing exercises - but I find the learning curve of the engines too vicious to realistically have time to do a good job of producing a whole game solo.

I wonder if anyone has any advice. It doesn’t feel like book / film world, where you get an agent, they shop your story around, etc. I wouldn’t even know where to start, given how many production companies there are.

But it’d be incredibly interesting - creatively, and in terms of seeing the other side of the process, the limitations that need to be written around, etc - to work with someone, or a small team. I’d love to try that. There is so much room for innovation in storytelling when compared with writing for the page or screen.

(Though I’m certain there are a million dudes out there who think: “I have a great idea for a game!”, lol.)

gwern a day ago

It's interesting how exactly this seems to parallel the rise of Hollywood in the 1920s-1960s sucking writers out of the rest of the world to work on scripts. The same risk/reward profile, the same looking down on the mass medium, the same blackhole of work if the rest of the massive project doesn't work out...

  • TMWNN a day ago

    >MILLIONS ARE TO BE GRABBED OUT HERE AND YOUR ONLY COMPETITION IS IDOTS

    —Email sent from video game writer to fellow author, c. 2025

  • cma a day ago

    The beginning of Barton Fink is a good watch if you want to immerse into this comment.

makeitdouble a day ago

> Sooner or later, almost everyone I talk to brings up the radically different cultural status of games and books

This is why we can't have good things. Too many people are stuck behind the status debate, and in particular caring about status also means protecting norms that might not be beneficial to one's art.

Basically, caring about being high brow is IMHO in opposition to being creative and innovative. It can be in small or big ways, but that happens at some level I guess.

The more interesting debate to me is where the money is: it's a lot easier to work in a field that can sustain creators, and if the money is in games, game creators will outlast the other field creators.

  • xrhobo a day ago

    I think this is just a human thing. The way science progresses one funeral at a time seems to apply to more than just science.

    I am actually learning Unreal engine for artistic purposes but I don't really like games. Video games for me are forever linked to growing up playing Atari and 16 bit Nintendo so it is hard to take seriously as art, even while learning Unreal to make art.

    True creativity, innovation and money usually don't go together. Composer Charles Ives I think is a really good example. Most of Ives life he would have introduced himself as an actuary in insurance. Ives also though probably doesn't make the same music if he didn't have the insurance income.

    The nature of the taste of the mass market in time almost dictates that only a few true lucky geniuses can be innovate, creative and make a great living all at the same time.

    We could probably have better things if we mythologized the life of someone like Ives that fits the present economic reality much better than The Beatles or Picasso.

  • sandspar a day ago

    It's The Guardian, a British newspaper for people who consider themselves upwardly mobile. Status anxiety is kind of their thing.

chc4 a day ago

One of my personal favorite examples is Seth Dickinson, who wrote some of the lore for Destiny, including the Book of Sorrow and Marasenna in-game lore books, which are IMO some of the best parts of the universe.

He then went on to write The Traitor Baru Cormorant, which I enjoyed a lot, and more recently Exordia - which is amusingly similar in themes and specific plot elements to the Book of Sorrow and really feels like Seth went "wait I wasn't done with that yet".

kev009 a day ago

Marc Laidlaw had a number of novels published before and after going to work for Valve and doing the Half Life thing.

"The Third Force" novel and the associated game "Gadget" are probably not well known - but if you liked Myst you might like them. It's a bit more of a visual story than a puzzle game - a bizarre psychological/psychedelic story with stunning for the time graphics (1993 or 1997 depending on the version).

exabrial a day ago

I very much enjoy single player rather than multi.

The plot twist at the end of Crysis, when you don’t realize there was an intelligent purpose to a game mechanic… was an absolutely unforgettable moment. I don’t want to put any spoilers… something you took into the entire game suddenly becomes extraordinarily important at the end.

Only a great novelist could’ve put that together.

charcircuit a day ago

This article ignores visual novels.

tiahura a day ago

Doesn’t everyone just hit escape as soon as a cut scene starts?

  • dentemple a day ago

    Sure, if all you're doing is buying the latest Call of Duty iteration/clone.

    But imagine spending $30 on a story-driven video game and just skipping the story.

    That's almost as bad as buying a book and never reading it.

    (Which, to be fair, is a sin that I do, sometimes, commit).

    • Swizec a day ago

      > That's almost as bad as buying a book and never reading it.

      > (Which, to be fair, is a sin that I do, sometimes, commit).

      Buying books and reading books are separate hobbies. Everyone knows this.

    • nkrisc a day ago

      Maybe I just enjoy the gameplay. The fact the story was also good is incidental to me (not that I followed the story).

    • deadbabe a day ago

      It is worth buying books even if you don’t read them. Having a collection of books waiting to be read is satisfying.

    • bluefirebrand a day ago

      > But imagine spending $30 on a story-driven video game and just skipping the story.

      I cannot imagine buying a "story driven videogame" honestly. I love reading and I love stories, but to me the appeal of videogames is to play. Videogame stories mostly just get in the way of the actual appealing fun part for me

      • NikolaNovak a day ago

        And why not - but surely you get that others may have a different perspective and preference right? :)

        • card_zero a day ago

          By discussing why we like things, we may influence others to try those things. I enjoy avoiding story-driven games because they're controling and lack replay value, and I'm recommending this as something you may like to try too.

          Or does recommending a negative not really work?

          • NikolaNovak 8 hours ago

            Recommending to stay away from something is a valid recommendation in my mind :-). I may not agree, and in this case I don't, but I appreciate the spirit in which it's given.

            Disco elysium, deus ex, cyberpunk 2077 have tremendous replay value to me in various ways. The story, for me, builds the flavour and the world, gets excited and invested, so that I want to replay and spend time in that game. It's not tough mutually exclusive from also enjoying games purely for their mechanics.

          • bigstrat2003 a day ago

            > I enjoy avoiding story-driven games because they... lack replay value

            I don't agree at all that this is true. I've greatly enjoyed replaying story-driven games much as I would enjoy rereading a book I enjoy. Much like with a good book, there is enjoyment to be had in immersing yourself in that world again, spending time with the characters you grew to like, and noticing things about the work that you didn't spot the first time around.

            • bluefirebrand 20 hours ago

              I replayed Cyberpunk 2077 four times because it is fun to play, not because I cared about immersing myself in the world or spending time with the characters

              Yeah, Keanu as Silverhand is fun

              But by the fourth time through the game when you hit those Relic Malfunctions that are long and drawn out and trigger long and unskippable talking scenes, I was pretty ready for a game option that was "Get rid of all of this and let me play without interruptions"

              I would have loved a quest system in that game that would randomly assign a building in the city to have a random enemy type inside it and an objective to handle, so I could just play

              I love that game. I think it is very fun. I like trying out different builds and weapons. I would probably play it more but the idea of starting a new game is not appealing. I don't want to slog through the first few hours of the game again until after the failed heist just to get the game world to open up

            • card_zero a day ago

              Sure, I probably played Arcanum (2001) five or six times. But I spent the years from about 1999 to 2006 playing Angband and Sid Meier's Alpha C. That's the kind of difference in replay value. And the only reason I played Arcanum more than once is that the different characters offered different gameplay, e.g. "this time let's be an explosives expert," or "this time let's be a really charismatic gnome".

              • nothercastle 18 hours ago

                Arcanum was good story stacked on mostly poor gameplay. It wanted to be a steam punk fallout and the story/setting carried out through what was otherwise pretty shitty gameplay.

                • card_zero 5 hours ago

                  I tend to agree that I liked the idea of the gameplay more than the way it actually worked out. I remember things such as: a pet dog you could add to your party who would steal all the experience points for himself; a skills system where in theory you could mix magic and technology, but in practice they interfered and more than negated any benefit of being creative with it; and a graveyard where zombies would spawn endlessly so that you could grind them for XP for as long as you could bear it.

                  I guess the atmosphere sells me on games. That's a whole other thing. I note "/setting".

          • BobaFloutist a day ago

            Yeah it doesn't really work.

            • card_zero a day ago

              Why is that though?

              • BobaFloutist 17 hours ago

                "You know this thing you like? Have you tried not liking it? Yeah, it's because I don't like it, and I just really think everyone should give disliking it a fair shot, even if they've tried it and think they like it, that just might be because they haven't really made an effort to dislike it"

                ETA: Or, to make it simpler, most people are more interested in finding things they might like than in finding ways to no longer enjoy things they already like.

                • card_zero 4 hours ago

                  I guess so, but the two come as a package, don't they? "Don't watch that, watch this," where the reason for being pro-this is also the reason for being anti-that.

      • bigstrat2003 a day ago

        > I love reading and I love stories, but to me the appeal of videogames is to play.

        I enjoy both. I wouldn't want a video game which has no interesting gameplay, but neither am I very drawn to games which are pure game and don't bother to have an interesting story. They are at least better than the former, and can even be good (Doom for example), but IMO can't reach the heights of games which are fun to play and have an interesting story.

      • yareally a day ago

        Not a fan of the first 3 Mass Effect games? They would feel pretty shallow without the storyline that made you care about the characters

        • bluefirebrand 20 hours ago

          Mass Effect is actually one of the game series that convinced me that video game stories aren't really worth it. Taken as a series, Mass Effect is a pretty bad story with wildly inconsistent writing quality. Taken as individual games they are all pretty good for different reasons, but they don't really form a coherent whole trilogy. I didn't bother playing Andromeda

          Mass Effect 1 had the worst gameplay, honestly. The shooting mechanics weren't good, the RPG mechanics felt tacked on. It did have the best story and most developed lore and characters though, but they aren't good enough for me to ever want to replay it

          2 had the best gameplay imo, but ths story took a nosedive. Some of the characters are alright, but overall it's a really bad story here

          3 was probably the middle ground between them. The story picked up a bunch of the hanging plot threads from 1 that 2 wound up ignoring. It also changed the gameplay a bit from 2 in ways that weren't good imo

          I used to think this sort of thing was the pinnacle of video games. Now I prefer playing stuff like Monster Hunter or Dark Souls, where the story is not the focus, but the gameplay is very fun and dynamic

          • nothercastle 18 hours ago

            Witcher is the best AAA implementation of a great story driving an otherwise decent game. I actually think that cyberpunk was weak mostly because they focused on Star power and the story was meh.

            • bluefirebrand 15 hours ago

              Witcher 1 might have the best story ever written but I'll never know because the gameplay is tedious

              Witcher 2 was a serviceable game with a serviceable story

              Witcher 3 was a vast sprawling story with gameplay that got old fast and it made the story a slog to get through. I had to force myself to finish it

              I played Cyberpunk four times in a row just because it is so damn fun to actually play and try out different builds and approaches to completing the missions

              • nothercastle 15 hours ago

                W1 had a tighter story. W2 expanded the world and w3 world is so huge it’s easy to lose the main story line. What I loved is that every individual sub story was well written and really made the world come to life. Cyberpunks world is a mismash of different sci fi themes and not consistent, the gameplay is good but the story is a bit cringe.

                • bluefirebrand 9 hours ago

                  I cannot imagine weighting story and writing higher than gameplay when judging the quality of a videogame

                  Every videogame journalist who writes about games from a "ludonarrative" perspective just comes across as someone who failed to get into writing about movies

                  I have one criteria: is the game fun to play

                  I can put up with a lot of cringe in a story if the game is fun

                  After all, cutscenes and dialog are almost always skippable. Gameplay isn't

                  I'll take Dark Souls minimalist storytelling or Cyberpunk's cringe storytelling but fun gameplay over any kind of game with mid gameplay and amazing writing

                  Edit:

                  I guess what I'm really saying is that for me, a good story and characters is icing, but games must be fun first. A bad game with good writing is still a bad game. A good game with bad writing is still a good game

                  I do not understand why people place so much emphasis on non-gameplay elements when judging a game. Watch a show or read a book instead if story is your main concern

  • NikolaNovak a day ago

    Depends on game and person, as does everything :). I buy games hugely for stories and characters. But also, cutscenes are hardly the only or for many games even the major place writers can contribute.

    Look at Disco Elysium with more than a million words written, but also anything from Cyberpunk 2077 to Colony Ship to Days of the Tentacle and Monkey Island and Space Quest, plus Mass Effect and KOTOR, Baldur's Gate and Plascape Torment... Great writing makes for great games :)

    • nothercastle 18 hours ago

      Considering how cheap writers are indie games really need more investment in the writing part.

  • makeitdouble a day ago

    There's a full genre of games that are 99% dialog and cut scenes. You better not skip those.

  • TMWNN a day ago

    I have never ever skipped a cut scene I have not seen before.

  • Trasmatta a day ago

    No. There are tons of games with great stories and tons of people that love enjoying them.

protocolture a day ago

Going to lay this out without names, but I have had the opportunity to meet some video game writers, from what I guess you would call the last (or N - 2) generation.

I have never before or since met a more self indulgent, greedy, stuck up set of snobs in all my time. People who are exposed to their work might think them interesting, funny people but they were quite serious and believe themselves at the pinnacle of writing.

I think the stage has long been set for professional novelists to show up and eat their lunch.

  • taeric a day ago

    Oddly, I suspect the same criticism would be true for many professional novelists? Similar for many professionals of any form, to be honest? Tending towards vain is not at all a trait monopolized by any profession.

    • azemetre 19 hours ago

      I think the parent commentator is lambasting storytelling in video games as being very poor. I can’t disagree if this is what they mean.

      Been playing games my entire life and even the most popular games like the Zelda series have average writing. Just because it’s serviceable doesn’t make it long lasting.

      Even those games with interesting stories like Bioshock or Red Dead Redemption don’t hold a candle to what literature can offer.

      They all really feel ephemeral compared to books which seem to last beyond the life of their authorship. Are there any games that will be the same? The medium itself means that it’s highly unlikely any of the games will be available in 200 years from now compared to the biology book I have from 1850s that still works fine and still bounded together.

      • protocolture an hour ago

        >I can’t disagree if this is what they mean.

        Definitely a factor, writing is generally poor, but the writers are acting as if they are literary genius.

        I can count a handful of games that I actually think are well written.

      • tarboreus 17 hours ago

        Only games that seem to have escaped this in my memory are Disco Elesium and Planescape Torment I'm leaving out interactive fiction but there's some very good writing in that niche.

        • azemetre 17 hours ago

          I haven't played it yet but all the other comments mentioning it is making me think I should check it out.

          I did enjoy "Slay the Princess" but my beef with such type of "games" is that they could have easily been in a different format with minimal loss of storytelling, like a webpage for instance.

          Disco Elesium seems really cool and way different than what I imagined.

          Also Planescape Torment looks great too, I actually like those type of games (forgetting the genre name ATM). Definitely bought both of them, excited to see how they handle storytelling in the medium.

          While on the subject, have you ever played the Legacy of Kain stories? I hear those have great stories as well but from what I can surmise (and read on wikipedia) is that those would have been best seller fantasy books if in a different medium.

          • protocolture 44 minutes ago

            Disco Elysium is not just good writing, its also good political commentary (from members of far left ideologies, but also not sparing far left ideologies from intense criticism)

            To the point where theres something like 4 teams making games right now claiming to be the true successor to Disco Elysium, as the publisher fired the original writers/developers and pivoted to mobile game development.

            I cannot recommend it enough. I played Outer Worlds in the same month, and Outer Worlds has the depth of a fox news rant in comparison.

      • nothercastle 18 hours ago

        But a mid to low tier sci fi writer can really make an otherwise ok game shine.

        • taeric 14 hours ago

          Depends what kind of story you want? Games like Slay the Spire didn't need a ton of writing to still have a very fun experience with interesting characters. Ico had minimal story, but an absurdly high atmosphere and emotional impact with what they had. Bastion's story was fun, if farcical. Hades literally won an award.

      • taeric 14 hours ago

        I mean... the storytelling in most stories is very poor. Full stop. All the more so as they try and be more sophisticated. Is obnoxious how "adult" has come to mean either very violent, or overly sexual. And I realize that isn't exactly new.

      • efilife 18 hours ago

        I don't see anything special in RDR(2)'s writing. Many of the characters' motives were left unexplained (even the most important ones), and Arthur often said contradictory things minutes apart

sandspar a day ago

"Phew, this novelist career is too unstable! I know - I'll become a video game writer instead!"

  • gwern 13 hours ago

    The key is, they are differently unstable. Two unstable careers can combine to a stabler career. While you work on the novel, you collect the check for the video game, say.

    The challenge always is ensuring that when you serve two masters, you don't wind up serving only one (as happens to many novelists or writers who went to Hollywood, and perhaps now with video game projects...).

  • hackable_sand a day ago

    The tech industry is super unstable so I switched to independent game development. Gonna do something with my skills either way.